Jay18
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Đề bài: It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
It is crucial to instill children at an early age to diversify what is right and wrong, and punishment is effective to deliver this concept to the young minds. I wholeheartedly agree with that idea, although some sort of punitive measures should be employed judiciously by parents and educators.
For many good reasons, forcing students to take responsibility on their actions seem to work very effectively for the sake of education. Learners then know what the limitation is so they will not cross again. For example, students who refused to do their homework are forced to do ten times the volume of their previous homework, thus in most cases pupils will try their best to finish their obligations. Therefore, improve the problem-solving skill and commitment to work, which will benefit them in the future.
However, I believe that the type of punishment adults ought to impose needs to be carefully pondered. Using excessive force and try to instill youngsters through violence can cause detrimental impacts on their minds. Adolf Hitler used to be harshly beaten by parents in his school days. That kind of excessive force distorted his young mind and when he grew up, he became one of the greatest dictators of all time. With that being said, what I try to deliver is that punitive measures are vital for children to discipline. Although harsh words form parents could be bad.
In conclusion, punishment obviously has its drawbacks, but in the long-term youngsters will reap the benefits from it.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
It is crucial to instill children at an early age to diversify what is right and wrong, and punishment is effective to deliver this concept to the young minds. I wholeheartedly agree with that idea, although some sort of punitive measures should be employed judiciously by parents and educators.
For many good reasons, forcing students to take responsibility on their actions seem to work very effectively for the sake of education. Learners then know what the limitation is so they will not cross again. For example, students who refused to do their homework are forced to do ten times the volume of their previous homework, thus in most cases pupils will try their best to finish their obligations. Therefore, improve the problem-solving skill and commitment to work, which will benefit them in the future.
However, I believe that the type of punishment adults ought to impose needs to be carefully pondered. Using excessive force and try to instill youngsters through violence can cause detrimental impacts on their minds. Adolf Hitler used to be harshly beaten by parents in his school days. That kind of excessive force distorted his young mind and when he grew up, he became one of the greatest dictators of all time. With that being said, what I try to deliver is that punitive measures are vital for children to discipline. Although harsh words form parents could be bad.
In conclusion, punishment obviously has its drawbacks, but in the long-term youngsters will reap the benefits from it.
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